We read a poem called "She was a phantom of delight", which talked about the feelings a man felt about a girl. Our challenge was to make our own, describing how we felt about someone we like.
Strong Heartbeat
Brown his eyes as dark his hair
Medium high and self-confident air
Not a bad guy, had no disrepute
What's more, he's really cute!
Worst are my nerves than his own
Some kind of conection, though no feeling was ever shown
Laughs, smiles, the deadliest crossing-looks in the world
Between him and I, there's no need of a word.
My love dressed in a friendly smile as he could
Would never confess even if I should
Loosing him is not one of my options
Even if that means hiding emotions.
Awesome work Agustina!
ResponderEliminarI know when there´s something great in front of me whenever I read and I go "Aaaawwwwhrrr" out loud.
Your poem is very expressive and you make excellent use of vocabulary and rhyme.
I hope you have a notebook full of these.
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